This is an example of some slight changes made when inking. His head looked really weird to me in the rough, and now the inks look really weird to me. Oh well, you can’t keep producing stuff if you keep going back and changing your mind, you need to move forward and do the best you can in the time you have.
See the final version here:
I think the problem in the final version is that his head skews a bit to the right.
I see what you mean but I really like the silhouette and energy of the final.