Here’s the script for episode 60 “The Grate”:
As you can see, I don’t format my script like normal scripts. These, I write as conversational dialogue and then go back and then put in the visuals and pull out some dialogue. I wish I could show and animate everything, but I just don’t have the time to make them that complicated!
The Grate
If you would push someone
-pushing a little kid
not do as your told
-teacher yelling
or just ignore the rules
-stick tongue out at kid
there was a place for you
-getting grabbed by the arm
the grate
-on grate
see, if you misbehaved at our school, you had to spend time on “the grate”
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it was a simple metal grate
-looking at feet
a place for you to take a time out
-sitting down
(slow truck in)
a place for you to think about what you’ve done
a place for the teachers to keep an eye on you
and a place for public ridicule
-reveal everyone looking
I remember all the kids staring
-see group staring
pointing
-pointing
laughing
-laughing
whispering
-cu of lips
the time spent there was an eternity
-x-diss to different moments in different places
but it would come to an end and you were free to play
-teacher nods
-step off grate
it was a good lesson a good punishment
-apologizing to kid
because you didn’t want to be sent to the grate again
-looking at grate
Here’s the final short: